Project Turing Preview

I decided to call the video we were working on Project Turing after the brilliant Alan Turing. Anyway, I posted it up on Youtube and 2 minutes after it finished I got a fucking 1 star vote. I bet that asshole didn't even read the the description.

Anyway, I managed to put together most of scene 7. It has no special effects, no voice acting, and ad hoc choice of music. I threw it together to see how it would look and give ya'll and idea of what we are working on.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V6ryNKLwx-0

Please watch (and give me a decent rating ).

that was veh nice.

Thanks. The main thing I need it know is if my editing is good enough. I tried to get it to flow failry well and be continous betwee cuts.

ok, it was pretty good for like your first actually thing, but some stuff i'm going to point out.
one part of the scene it shows the time, i think you might want to get rid of that.
also, you never ever ever want to use the camera view of following a player around,
it looks really weird like that, even if it's a montage of you super killing people
and the music...was...not very fitting?

Yeah, I noticed the stupid time thing just before reading this post. It pissed me off to see that I made a mistake that stupid. I also had doubts about letting the camera follow the person but it probably worked out best for particular scene and area. It was a really ugly area for a camera. I know the music was not right either. I don't have harldy any on my computer so I just slopped something in there real quick.

This was a really rough preview. I did no effects, no real music, and no voice. I just wanted to see if my camera was going to be close enough for stuff to look alright on YouTube.

oh it's fine, i just don't think you should use the third person camera, it looks very odd

yeah
agreed

But it was still kinda good, right?

unseen, its your opinion if its good or not.
you dont ask other people if it was good unless you havent seen it.
but yes it was good

woah, you going philosophical all over us burrito

I thought it was great when I made it. Then again it was right before I passed out from sickness. Now that I look at it I can see a lot of rough spots. And I actually do appreciate constructive criticism.

haha yes i am sooo philosophical.
if thats even a word.

no problem driftor, that's what a machinima clan is for to help each other make great machinima, yes!
and yes burrito that is a word

O.o
sweet!!!

Burrito Philosophical???? More like PhilosoPHILE Or......Or...........PHILOSO-RAPTOR!!!!!

no blackwater.....just no

yeah that was kinda retarded

I'm far away from my Xbox but I might post some more scenes in here for some input. I will link you to raw WMV files if I do it.

http://www.filedropper.com/scene3-test1

That is a 17.1MB WMV file for my first attempt at scene 3. It has no music, voiceovers, effects, or final edits.

ok i'll check it out later.
im at a friends house

Here we go, I was able to crank one more out today.

http://www.filedropper.com/scene1-test1

This on is less than 1MB.

That was pretty good, but you might want to work on those camera angles. Still i don't think you should use the 3rd person camera view, but that's your choice i guess

Nightfire33 wrote:

That was pretty good, but you might want to work on those camera angles. Still i don't think you should use the 3rd person camera view, but that's your choice i guess

You mean the 3rd person following camera that is locked on to the elite when falling, or making this entirely in first person?

yah the elite guy, and i don't think you should make it all first person

http://www.filedropper.com/scene5-test2 11.2MB

here is part of scene 5 with some voice from Jimmy. I have about 1/3 of the audio for this scene but I patched together what I had to just to see how it would look. Of all the scenes so far, this one looks like it needs the most work.