Jimmy come back!

ok this starts out jimmys smoothy driving away from the person singing and he sings " jimmy come back!! you can blame it all on your" then he says really fast "fat ass bitch mom." Then suddenly jimmys car stops and he gets out and says "what did you just say about my mommy?!" then the guy says" that shes a fat ass bitch" then jimmy says"oh ya then then why dont you say that to her self!"then the guy goes "ok then where is she?" jimmy points out"shes right over there" then as he is walking he says" oh you mean that.... holy ****! she fricken ugly run for your lives!"then jimmy looks and says "how could she be..... omg she is ugly run!!!" then shes an elite and she walks up and says "what i just got my make up done" then the screen goes black.

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wut?

ok all u need to do unseen is put the characters name next to what theyre saying.
just so its not as confusing

unseen i know you're trying man, but this material is...well for like 10 year olds, i know you can do better dude

thanks nightfire i know i can try better, but i can never think of any thing.


ok i just edited the story so you know whos who.

ok now i can understand it a little better

its poop