A serious film idea from jimmy...*SHOCK*

Its about a conspiracy to start war with the elites...
Heres the prologue I've written its told from the point of view of the guy who started it all.

Here it is
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12:00 Noon
A sunny afternoon the Sangheili just escorted their ambassador to Camp Froman.
for the First Galactic peace summit...

1:00 pm
The issue of overpopulation on both planets is brought up
Sangheili ambassador laughs...

1:10 pm
Anxious to leave my hornet is prepped for takeoff...

1:30 pm
Hornet leaving Zanzibar airspace.
Detonation codes already input...
I take one last look...
Palms sweaty I push the button...

(last resort fade to white with loud boom)

3:14 pm
I am promptly arrested upon landing...
They said i'd have a heroes welcome...

4:50 pm
Beaten and tortured into submission,
I sign their unjust confession
and am led off to a cell...

5:00
Sangheili Declare War...
So it begins...

wow, that actually sound very good, nice!
i think are clan are going to make some revolutionary vids from now on

Thanks I just wanted to prove that i can be serious...
Oh and that i can write.
It took me 30 minutes.

Sounds good so far.

Thanks again...

DIZZAMMMM, Way to Take it to the next level!!

i like it
there was just one problem i saw.
in last resort/zanzibar, there is no hornet.
(not to be a pest or anything)

Meh i meant to just have a shot of a hornet flying over water Valhalla will suffice for that
and heres part two of the script

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2:43 pm
Second day of Conflict
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They bring me my lunch.
Too many prisoners want to kill me...
I don't blame them...

"Soups up asshole" Guard shouts as he tosses my food into the cell

2:43:15 pm
Alarm sounds,
Lucky me...

Guard shouts "come with me... Now!"

I reply "why the sudden change of heart?"

Guard screams "I've been paid to keep you alive not to like you... Now hurry the fuck up!!!"

We run down the corridor gunfire in backround
and I begin to wonder...
"Who exactly paid you"
Guard screams goddamnit shutup and run
"But we just passed the exit..."
"I know... Quick follow me..."
he leads me to munitions...
"quick grab one!!!" He says
I ask "Now Why would you arm a Convict?"
"Because we know whos behind this..." the guard states...
Before I can ask "Whos we?" Two elites walk into the room...

woah dude, you've done a lot of thinking jimmy. keep it up and we'll probably film this!

i still likes

Heres the next part
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2:57 pm

Two my surprise "we" includes two elites...
Guess it goes deeper than I thought...

The blue elite asks "is the bomb planted?

My guard reply's "yup the "meals" have been delivered..."

Confused I yell "So you tried to feed the guy your protecting a bomb?"

The guard says "yeah and???"

Getting more pissed by the second I scream
" What if i ate it? What Then?"

Guard looks at me calmly and says
"Then one less douche bag..."
Hearing footsteps we ready our rifles.
The yellow elite analyzes the situation " 20 on the stairs 12 in the halls... Course of action???"
The guard pauses. I can tell its bad
An explosion gos off in the distance
"Theres our cue... Now Jump" He screams
we jump out the window
We all land safely on the snow...
All but one...

The guards down...
Ankle shattered...

"I'm a goner" he moans

"No" I shout
"what about your loved ones"

"Dead... The elites glassed their city 3 hours ago"

"Im so sorry" i say with guilt

"Shut up and get going asshole Theres a hog over the ridge,
A Red elite is waiti--"
Shot rings out... The sniper round pierces his skull
No reason left to wait We run...
Leaving the nameless guard behind...

damn
its sweet

ima so confused! hey did you think of a title yet?

Dude....My dick Grew an Inch Just from Hearing that, Youre Fucking Brilliant

I'll probably call it "Overflow"

OMG DOGG! who is going to film this? roy? cookie? driftor? maybe you???

1st of all it has not been run by Roy yet so I don't know if it will even pass as a series
I'd prefer Cookie or Driftor
It would all be in filmed 1st person using theater
(I'm not copying Nightfire just ask Blackwater & Corn I decided it would be made this way before i finished the prologue)
Oh and heres part 3
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3:28 pm
We reach the Warthog
I know what must be done
This conspiracy must be brought to light
But how?
I thought this course of action would fix the problem,
but all it seems to have done is enhance it...
Either way a plan must be formulated...

As we board the hog I ask "Whos in charge here anyway?"
Yellow elite replys "That would be Sebastian..."
"Sebastian huh weird name for an Eli-- Oh he was the guard wasn't he?"
I say promptly inserting foot in mouth...

I try to redirect the conversation...
"Well who's second in command?"
I ask...
They stare at me briefly...
I get the picture...

"We're here"
Says the red elite

I think aloud
"Hmm isn't this a-"
I'm cut off...
Blue elite says "Yup a good old fashioned abandoned military compound"
The yellow elite states
"Keep your guard up others may have inhabited"
Red elite stops suddenly
I say "What gives???"
He whispers "We're not alone..."

veryzzz nice

Heres a part i forgot to put between 2 & 3
Its an interlude of sorts
and it introduces the villains
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3:45 pm Guards corpse

Four shadowy figures Approach

"Hmm Heres a fresh One...
Kain,Abel
Prep your new 'Playmate' For the procedure..."


They two respond in an eerie unison
"Yes Mr Glass..."

They knockout their "Playmate" and suddenly
The guard stands staring blankly at the horizon
Mr glass Says quietly "Sebastian... I have a proposition to make...
Your friends they left you for dead. I want no need you to follow them regroup assimalate yourself within and then once they order is given...
Kill them, all of them"
Sebastian replys coldly "As you wish..."

Jimmy_Fingas wrote:

I'll probably call it "Overflow"

That's what she said.

you sick demented bastard.
jk