The 503rd Episode 1: Nicknames

I may edit it, but it looks pretty soild to me. And I like it. Tell me if you want to be any of these characters.

Script:

(Short firefight scene)
Campfire: Hey…hey stop moving your head. I think only the audio’s on. Oh no wait..what about now?
Nightfire: Yeah yeah it’s working.
Campfire: K cool…hey what’s the call sign they gave you?
Nightfire: Uhh…Nightfire I think.
Campfire: What?! What the crap, they actually gave you a nickname that sounds good?!?
Nightfire: Why? What is yours?
Campfire: Mine?! Mine is Campfire, seriously…
Nightfire: (laugh) It fits.
Campfire: Shut up…oh crap, dude we needed to be at the recruit announcement thingy. Maybe we can still make it.
(Both run)
Aww man, we just missed it. Hope Major Smith doesn’t bust our asses…
(Camp and Night turn around to walk away)
Fire: HEY!
Campfire: Shit..I spoke to soon.
(Both turn around)
Fire: You two missed an important introduction today.
Campfire: Sorry sir! We…we...
Fire: No need to make excuses son, I wouldn’t have gone either. Anyway, go get geared up, I’ll be taking you recruits through some warm ups.
Campfire and Nightfire: Yes sir!
(Fire walks different direction from Camp and Night)
Campfire: Alright man see ya later gotta get my stuff.
(Camp turns different direction)
(static cut)
(Short firefight scene)
(static)
(Sitting on side of Hornet)
Hellfire: This is Hellfire speaking. We're almost there, hope the flight was smooth.
(static)
(Hornet lands)
Fire: Ahh I’m glad you could make it Nightfire. Remember, from here on out we only use our nicknames.
(static)
(black screen)
(credits)

pretty good.
is that going to be the only thing for episode 1?
cuz it seems pretty short

short and sweet

alright i feelz ya

Nightfire33 wrote:

short and sweet

JUST LIKE MY PENIS!!!

...wow... thats... revealing... thanks for that info jimmy. dont worry, i wont judge you... that much

I need people for Campfire and Fire