Squadron B71

ok im writing this literally right as im thinking it...its called "Squadron B71" and it documents the trials and hardships of being a UNSC Marine

I figured we could start it off with basic training (on a forged foundry map or somethin like that) and chronicle like 4 marines independant adventures in basic training all the way up to their initiation into the UNSC. then we could document their hardships faced in the middle of the war in their company: "Squadron B71".

we could get some deep conflicts going and make this a good long film
CONFLICT POSSIBILITIES:
two of the characters despise each other and have to learn to cope with the fact that they are brothers in their Squadron
one of the characters recieves a letter from his father saying his mother died somehow and he contemplates giving up his hope on the war
thats all i got now....

and at the end "the final battle before they were all dispatched from the UNSC" they could all die, except for one of them, in a tragic warthog accident after they had won the fight, but there was one enemy left stading who got a hold of a spartan laser and did work...and the one who survived could be narrating the stroy maybe???

any ideas are obviously accepted...

and i know it sounds cliche at times but i really think we can make it work...

haha B71 is ur service tag

fuck you its a great service tag and just tell me what u think

hmmmm it's very some how similar but not similar to mine

hehe ok well i think its got potential in it but its really broad so its hard to tell

i like it, but a lot of people have done squadrons and stuff
like mine hehe, but mine has a twist...what could it be?

well sorry if i copied u by accident nightfire, i didnt see urs...

sorry for double posting, but my idea and nightfires are different enough, but im wondering if theres any way we can fuse together the storylines or something cuz i really like nightfires idea as well as mine, and they seem like they could fit together

like maybe we could do nightfires idea and have mine be a segue into his by using my characer which survives at the end as the main character in the next one???


but nightfires is obviously more developed

and im just tossing out possibilities here

you could be the view of another squad in my storyline

well sure, theres a bunch of directions i think we could go with this in my view

over the weekend we'll talk about it, because i don't feel like it right now lol

Seems like a conflict of scripts here....

I think you need to start from the beginning. Make a character list, make a basic plot outline, idea bin, pictures work well, ect, ect.