BloodSport

This Is My Idea....It started as a Gladiator Rip off, But Grew to be something More....

Characters:
1: Sgt. Andric
2: Vlad(Dies)
3: Col. Croft(dies)
4: "The Poacher"(DIES HORRIBLY)
5: The voice over the headset(?)
6: Pvt. Vaughn(Dies a Noob's Death)
7: Ricky(Dies Like a Man)


Profiles:
Sgt. Andric: American, Early Thirties, Valorous, Positive Attitude But Very Little Emotion(kills without Hesitation) and Slight Sense of Humor.

Vlad: Russian, 25, Ex Soldier, Prisoner , Discharged for Killing Commanding Officer, Angry, Sarcastic With dry Wit, Legally INSANE.

Col. Croft: British, 60, Jolly, Almost Retired, Married, Slightly Senile, Positive and Empathetic.

The Poacher: Basically This Is Blade But MUCH quieter, He's Played By Blade Thats All you Know About Him.

The Voice Over the Headset: Deep Voice(most likely NightFire's)

Pvt. Vaughn: Has Only Seven Lines(Who The Fuck Are You?/I'm Private Vaugh/What?/I Have No Finger Fucking Clue as Whats Going On!!/ Wait?? Does He Expect Us To WAIT?? We'll Probably Die In this Shit Pit!!!/Fuck That!! I'm Going out Regardless of your Gay Ass Paranoia[dies])

Ricky: Merc, Hispanic, Badass, Nothing To Lose.

The Concept:
Man Is Captured, Placed in an Area Rigged Nukes, Forced to Fight against Other Captives in order To escape The area Only to Get placed in The Same Situation 10 more Times, Then He fights Back and Tries To Kill His Captor after realizing there will be no Freedom for the last man standing, Lots of People Die and SHIT BLOWS UP!!!...

Please Tell Me what You think...I Know its a Unoriginal Concept But Is ANYTHING TRUELY ORIGINAL In this Day and Age??? Hopefully You'll Look past the Concept and think about the other Features(Plot, Fight Scenes, Script) I'll release an Actual Script once I know What You think...

yeah i dont know if this is like a first copy of idea, but SO FAR, its not bad

AHHHHHH, its like attack of the capital letters. Decent idea but needs more polish.

Ha Ha POLISH

yeah why do you do some words with the first letter cap'd and others not?

because when blackwater is typing his finger twitches and pushes down one the shift button randomly

oh and it's pretty good, but try to have a unique twist to it

Thanks, And I'll Try to make it as Unique as Possible.....and To answer your Question, I never Payed attention during Grammer Classes...So I type Whatever I think may be a Cap...Sometimes(A LOT) I overlook The Capitalization or Just Over Capitalize....This Isnt Finished BTW, its Just a Quickie

Twitchy Finger i Say...See i Think i'm doing It Now to

welcome To The others!!!

haha
you said a quickie

I'm Working on the Plot Right Now...I should Have It Soon.